I think that i liked my essey because it let other people know more about me and what i like and what i do and who iam  i think it showed a lot abuot me that other people didnt know it let them know what communites,values,culture,right,and reponsbilitys and i think that i got to show what i celebarat what kind of groups iam in what my favirote sport is what i do for fun what i think are rights are in the world what i think it is are job to do at home and why and the things i value in the world like family,freinds,games,tv,sports and phones.IT shows what i belife in what tipe of movies i see and what kind o tridistions i have.
I think that i connected with a lot of people like henry because he belifes in family and freaind and so do i and i value pet and he belifs in having pets.I also have thing in common with sam because he does sports like baseball and i play basketball so we both like sports.I share liking pets and animals and me and drayton  like sports also,